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Boost your writing by using strong verbs

    Every sentence needs a subject and a verb – and the stronger your verb, the stronger your sentence.

    Instead of writing:

    I really do not like boiled asparagus.

    write:

    I loathe boiled asparagus.

    A single strong word is always better than several weaker ones. Instead of writing:

    I walked gingerly. 

    write:

    I tiptoed.

    Be specific

    Specific words are strong because they help build a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.

    Think of the difference between slurp and drink, or strut and walk.

    You never want to exaggerate – but if someone slurps or struts, then say so. It’s far better than writing: drinks loudly and messily or walks in a cocky manner.

    Be straightforward

    Strong verbs are also straightforward.

    Instead of writing:

    Get an eyeful of the action at the outdoor cinema.

    write:

    Watch the action at the outdoor cinema.

    Whoever wrote Get an eyeful was probably trying to be creative – but it doesn’t improve the writing. It simply makes it longer.

    Now, if you come up with a turn of phrase that’s genuinely inspired – ie it makes the reader see things in a different way, or laugh out loud, or evokes a strong image – then by all means use it. If not, however, then you’re better off using a simple verb that says exactly what it needs to.

    Avoid saying “not”

    If the word not appears in the middle of a verb phrase, then think about whether you can say the same thing in less words.

    For example, instead of writing:

    Dan did not keep walking.

    write:

    Dan stopped walking. 

    or even:

    Dan halted.

    Good communication is ultimately about clarity and word choice – and choosing the right verb is crucial.

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